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I got a B on this paper but my instructor is giving me a chance to get an A+! Please read her comments below and make the necessary changes to the paper to meet the A+ standards!


FEEDBACK:

You earned a grade of B on this paper (85%). There are a few areas needing more detail and explanation. Please review my feedback below.

You sufficiently describe the organization and provided details about the company along with identifying the issues and describing what you know about them. In describing the issues it showed me you understood how the issues impacted the organization. There were many elements missing from the paper that could have positively impacted my knowing you understood how to diagnosis organizational problems. There needed to be more information about the company (e.g. when they were established, what service(s) or products they provide, and other relevant information).

In terms of current corporate culture, you want to talk about the organizational culture in detail by drawing on and synthesizing corporate information about the company. It is important to make logical and realistic connections that are supported by source material. The application of research to help you understand the concepts was lacking.

Now, in this part of the paper you needed to provide strengths and weaknesses. You did a really good job of coming up with strengths and weaknesses of the organization. It's important, though, to get out a handful of positive and negative areas of the organization. However, additional details and source support would improve this part of the paper.

When you develop a program you must first propose solutions, you need to make sure to fully explore the pros and cons of those options. This assignment allows you a checklist of what you need to look for in ensuring you have the right solution to the right problem. You did provide some solutions that made some connections to resolve the problem. There need to be a little more explanation of the resolution to determine you could make the connection.

Your references met the paper requirement. Good job!

There were just a few Strayer Writing Standards related citation issues. Remember that you always need to provide support for information that is the work of someone else.

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